In the late spring, the desert smells like chocolate. It’s fleeting. The more I sniffed at bark, the more confused I became. What did pine even smell like, anyway? It can come across mildewy and rank, like dirty laundry left in a damp basement.
暮春时节,沙漠氤氲着宛若巧克力的馥郁芬芳。这芳馨转瞬即逝。我愈是吸嗅树皮之香,心中困惑便愈发浓厚:松之香,究竟何以名状?它或许会霉变腐臭,宛如那被弃置于一间幽暗潮湿的地下室一隅的待浣垢衣,散发出阵阵秽气。
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